How good are you at playing sports? How could you be better?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not good at all of sport, and I don\'t like doing sport and exercise.
I just like to liying on bed with nothing than exercise,
These days, I think about \"I must to do exercise\", So I try to plan diet control and filates,
And I want to more activity life.
To excel in exercise, I think It must have a basic technic.
For example, It must have consistent effort from a young age
or be born with genetic talent.
To be honest, If we don\'t have interest or talant of sport, the probability of doing well decreases.
People who not interested in sports and not good at sports are usually get other hobby or diet control to different way.
강사 첨삭
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I\'m not good at all of sport, and I don\'t like doing sport and exercise.
>>> I\'m not good at all sports, and I don\'t like doing sport and exercise.
>>> OR: I\'m not good at any kind of sport, and I don\'t like doing sports and exercises.
I just like to liying on bed with nothing than exercise,
>>> I just like to lay in bed doing nothing.
These days, I think about \"I must to do exercise\", So I try to plan diet control and filates, And I want to more activity life.
>>> These days, I think about \"I must to do exercise\", so I try to make a diet plan and Pilates. Moreover, I want a more active lifestyle.
These days, I think about \"I must to do exercise\", So I try to plan diet control and filates, And I want to more activity life.
>>> These days, I think about \"I must to do exercise\", so I try to make a diet plan and Pilates. Moreover, I want a more active lifestyle.
To excel in exercise, I think It must have a basic technic.
>>> To excel in exercise, I think it must have a basic technique.
For example, it must have consistent effort from a young age or be born with genetic talent.
>>> correct
To be honest, If we don\'t have interest or talant of sport, the probability of doing well decreases.
>>> correct
To be honest, If we don\'t have interest or talant of sport, the probability of doing well decreases.
>>> To be honest, if we don\'t have interest or talent in sports, the probability of doing well decreases.
People who not interested in sports and not good at sports are usually get other hobby or diet control to different way.
People who not interested in sports and not good at sports are usually get other hobby or diet control to different way.
>>> People who are not interested in sports and not good at sports usually get other hobbies or diet control in a different way.
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