How happy are you with your English level? How do you describe your feelings about English?
학생이 쓴 원문
As I got older,I am not able to remember the words in my brain even if I knew that.
When I talk to you in class I am not feeling happy enough.
But I accept my memorial ability ,I am not so sad. I will make an effort more, to improve as possible .
I will follow your advice also too for my long term goal.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Try to organize your thoughts more.
Give examples to make your point.
Give definitions if you have to.
Don\'t limit yourself and try new patterns.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
As I got older,I am not able to remember the words in my brain even if I knew that.
>> As I get older, I am not able to remember vocabulary words even if I have already learned them.
When I talk to you in class I am not feeling happy enough.
When I talk to you in class I am not feeling happy enough.
>> When I talk to you in class, I don\'t feel satisfied.
But I accept my memorial ability ,I am not so sad.
But I accept my memorial ability ,I am not so sad.
>> However, I don\'t feel so bad anymore when I try to accept my limitations.
I will make an effort more, to improve as possible .
>> I will exert more effort to improve as much as possible.
I will follow your advice also too for my long term goal.
I will follow your advice also too for my long term goal.
>> I will also follow your advice to achieve my long-term goals.
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