How has technology changed education methods
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Hi [이름]!
You are right! technology has made our lives convenient. We should enjoy its benefits but we have to know its limitation as well.
Enjoy your day!
~Kelly^^
Technology has changed a lot of things in our life.
>> Correct.
There are two examples.
>> There are two examples to support my answer.
First of all, it is really useful in the class.
>> Correct.
Whenever, we have questions, we can search what we don\'t know right away and resolve the problems.
>> Whenever we have questions, we can search for the information that we don\'t know right away and resolve the problems.
Second, it allows us save our energy.
>> Second, it allows us to save our energy.
By using computers or smart phones, they help us write down on the computer easily.
>> Did you mean: We can easily type using a computer keyboard or smartphone keyboard.
In addition, when a professor doesn\'t have enough time to teach in the class and should hurry, we can take PPT\'s picture and study by using our smart phones.
>> In addition, when a professor doesn\'t have enough time to teach in the class and is in a hurry, we can take pictures of PPT\'s, save them in our smartphones and study them on our own.
As a result, technology has changed our life.
>> Correct.
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