How has technology, such as fitness apps and wearable devices, influenced people’s approach to maint
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I beileve that new technology can help exerecise easy.
In my case, I wear a smart watch, so I can measure my heartbeat rate and a number of walk.
These records help to keep the motivation for exercises.
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Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I beileve that new technology can help exerecise easy.
>> I believe that new technology can make exercising easier.
In my case, I wear a smart watch, so I can measure my heartbeat rate and a number of walk.
>> In my case, I wear a smartwatch, which allows me to measure my heart rate and track the number of steps I take.
These records help to keep the motivation for exercises.
>> These records help keep me motivated to exercise
>> I believe that new technology can make exercising easier.
In my case, I wear a smart watch, so I can measure my heartbeat rate and a number of walk.
>> In my case, I wear a smartwatch, which allows me to measure my heart rate and track the number of steps I take.
These records help to keep the motivation for exercises.
>> These records help keep me motivated to exercise
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