How has the Internet changed the world?

I think the internet changed many things. We could be connected whole world and communicated anywhere by internet. Also when I want other country’s products, I can be received the things in my home. While i live here, It being possible and i enjoy this world it’s a revolution.

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I think the internet changed many things.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe the internet has changed many things.

We could be connected whole world and communicated anywhere by internet.

>>We can now be connected to the whole world and communicate from anywhere through the internet.

Also when I want other country’s products, I can be received the things in my home.

>> Also, when I want products from other countries, I can have the items delivered to my home.

OR>>Furthermore, when I want products from other countries, I can have them delivered to my home.

While i live here, It being possible and i enjoy this world it’s a revolution.

>> While I live here, the fact that it\'s possible and that I can enjoy this world feels like a revolution.

OR>> It\'s like a complete transformation that I can live here and find joy in this world.