How has the meaning of Christmas [이름]nged for you as you\'ve grown older?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most people is thinking Christmas is love day because many people love start in Christmas.
But I\'m not thinking about a love start in Christmas.
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Hi Jimmy!
This is your first revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below.
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Jean~~
How has the meaning of Christmas [이름]nged for you as you\\\'ve grown older?
I think the most people is thinking Christmas is love day because many people love start in Christmas.
>>> I think most people believe Christmas is about love because many couples start their relationships at that time.
>>> OR: I believe most people believe that Christmas is a day of love because many relationships begin during Christmas.
But I\'m not thinking about a love start in Christmas.
>>> But I don’t think about starting a relationship during Christmas.
>>> OR: However, I don’t think about starting a romantic relationship at Christmas.
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