How has the way people celebrate [이름]nged in recent years?
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I think the peoples celebrate is before give a flower but now is give a money.
So I think the celebrate now is very good.
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How has the way people celebrate [이름]nged in recent years?
I think the peoples celebrate is before give a flower but now is give a money.
>>> I think people used to give flowers as gifts when celebrating, but now they usually give money.
So I think the celebrate now is very good.
>>> I believe today’s way of celebrating is good.
>>> OR: Personally, I prefer modern celebrations.
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