How has the world changed since you were a child? (technology, values, environment, health)

Hello, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for this very informative composition. I learned a lot about the importance of your job as a radiation therapist.

I hope more and more machineries could be invented to improve the overall medical competence worldwide. ^^ Have a nice day, Sir. See you!

~T.Avery

I would like to state my opinion about how has medical techniques changed, especially cancer treatment.

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The most important regimen in the cancer treatment is surgery.

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The chemotherapy and radiation therapy are adjuvant therapy.

>> The chemotherapy and radiation therapy are both adjuvant therapies.

Many patients died without what are the main cause of the death because there were poor medical diagnose equipment.

>> Many had patients died without knowing the main cause of death because there of poor medical diagnostic equipment.

However, people can get proper treatment early if they get medical check up regularly.

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OR>> Regular medical check-up may help prevent various illnesses.

Patients have a lot of choice to cure their diseases such as surgery, chemotherapy and radiation therapy.

>> Patients have a lot of choices to cure their diseases such as surgery, chemotherapy and radiation therapy.
Some cancers can be cured by only radiation therapy without surgery.

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Radiation is especially effective for prostate cancer treatment.

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Chemotherapy medications are also invented a lot more than we had before.

>> Chemotherapy medications were developed a lot more than before.

People hope that cancer will be completely treated with chemo agents.

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As I know, there are still a lot of challenges to treat cancer.

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Doctors and researchers are putting their efforts to invent new treatments regimens.

>> Doctors and researchers are putting their efforts to invent new treatment regimens.