How has you eating habits changed from when you were younger compared to now?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I didn’t kare what I ate.
I just ate without any thinking.
However, after I got married, I have been trying to take good care of myself for my family.
But it is hard to eat good food for me bacause I have to more thinker for my family than myself.
I even couldn’t feel myself that my life focused on my family.
One day, I was found that I was eating anything that was good or not good for me.
And then, my health had been so bad that I have been trying to change my eating habits now.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss [이름]!
When I was young, I didn’t kare what I ate.
>>> When I was young, I didn’t care about what I ate.
I just ate without any thinking.
>>> I just ate without thinking.
>>> OR: I just ate without any thoughts.
However, after I got married, I have been trying to take good care of myself for my family.
However, after I got married, I have been trying to take good care of myself for my family.
>>> correct
But it is hard to eat good food for me bacause I have to more thinker for my family than myself.
But it is hard to eat good food for me bacause I have to more thinker for my family than myself.
>>> But it is hard to eat good food for me because I have to think more for my family than myself.
I even couldn’t feel myself that my life focused on my family.
>>> I even couldn’t feel myself that my life is focused on my family.
One day, I was found that I was eating anything that was good or not good for me.
>>> One day, I found that I was eating anything that was good or not good for me.
And then, my health had been so bad that I have been trying to change my eating habits now.
>>> correct
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