How has your country changed from five years ago?
학생이 쓴 원문
After the COVID-19 pandemic, many things have changed in Korea. Students studied on the internet. And many things changed to the online. Now, there are many things are done online.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
After the COVID-19 pandemic, many things have changed in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
Students studied on the internet.
>>> Students studied on the Internet.
And many things changed to the online.
>>> And many things changed online.
Now, there are many things are done online.
>>> Now, there are many things that are done online.
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