How has your education contributed to who you are today?

2017-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

학생이 쓴 원문

To be honest, I have been studying any kind of fields for particular goals regarding my direction. I try to memorize words, meanings and even all paragraphs to understand backgrounds in related fields for achieving the goals. I prefer memorizing everything when I decide to study somethings. also it is one of my strengths. It gives me accumulated knowledges and help enable me to talk about specific topics in front of interviewers and study members during short term. However, the biggest problem of this way is to forget most of the contents after achieving something like getting scores of certificates, finishing any projects and entering the company. Although I am suffering from forgetting basic knowledges after being a employee of my company, I am sure that memorizing makes me to be a successful person in its own way. I am going to go the extra mile harder for improving English skills to use on my way!

강사 첨삭

 Hello [이름]!


It\'s been a while that I\'m not checking your homework. I\'m really glad that you are making an extra mile to improve your English. Don\'t worry I will help you with that, See you later.


Teacher Travis.


To be honest, I have been studying any kind of fields for particular goals regarding my direction.
>> To be honest, I\'ve been studying any kind of fields for particular goals regarding for my direction.
I try to memorize words, meanings and even all paragraphs to understand backgrounds in related fields for achieving the goals.
>>I tried memorizing words, meanings and even all paragraphs to understand the backgrounds in related fields for achieving goals.
I prefer memorizing everything when I decide to study somethings. also it is one of my strengths.

>>Correct.
 It gives me accumulated knowledges and help enable me to talk about specific topics in front of interviewers and study members during short term.
>>Correct.

>>OR: It gives me more knowledge and help enable me to talk about specific topics in front of interviewers and study members during short term. 
 However, the biggest problem of this way is to forget most of the contents after achieving something like getting scores of certificates, finishing any projects and entering the company.
>>Correct.
Although I am suffering from forgetting basic knowledges after being a employee of my company, I am sure that memorizing makes me to be a successful person in its own way.
>>Correct.
I am going to go the extra mile harder for improving English skills to use on my way!

>>I\'m going extra mile to improve my English skills to use on my way!

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