How has your health changed when you were younger compared to now? What were your eating habits then

2022-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Raven

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When I was little, I was a pick eater that I ate what I want to. But not anymore, I can\'t digest well as I\'m getting older. Also, I don\'t really get a fast food without midnight. :)

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Hello Elic, thank you for doing your best in this homework! Your sentences were very nice. I am happy that your punctuations and capitalizations are now correct. Please review my corrections carefully. Try to take notes of the corrections which you have noticed from them. Again, thank you and have a great day ahead! :)

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When I was little, I was a pick eater that I ate what I want to.
>> When I was little, I was a picky eater, I ate only what I want.
But not anymore, I can\'t digest well as I\'m getting older.
>> But not anymore, as I got older, I had a hard time digesting food.
Also, I don\'t really get a fast food without midnight. :)
>> I also don\'t really get fast food at midnight.

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