How has your personality [이름]nged as you have grown older?
학생이 쓴 원문
My before personality is very Quite But, now is very fun and exciting like.
So I\'m very much [이름]nged as personality.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
This is your first revised composition from last week\'s homework. You can see the corrected version below.
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Jean~~
How has your personality [이름]nged as you have grown older?
My before personality is very Quite But, now is very fun and exciting like.
>>> I was quiet before, but I\'m now fun and exciting.
So I\'m very much [이름]nged as personality.
>>> So, my personality has [이름]nged a lot.
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