How has your smartphone contributed to your life so far?
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Yes of course, my smart phone contributes to my life quite deeply. I can search everything, learn many things, and set an alarm with smart phone as well. It’s quite useful device.
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>>Yes, of course my smart phone contributes a lot to my life.
2. I can search everything, learn many things, and set an alarm with smart phone as well.
>>CORRECT!
3. It’s quite useful device.
>>It\'s quite a useful device.
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