How have birthdays changed from generation to generation in your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
n the past, we preferred boys to girls, so when boys were born, it was fortunate for the family. That day, We hung a rope with red chilly pepper poking above the front gate of the house. The purpose is to boast of having a boy in their family and to wish for the boy’s long life without sickness and bad fortunes. In addition, When there was a rope hung above the front gate, people didn’t visit the house to protect the baby from viruses or germs out of the house. That’s because babies died of sickness or contagion within 100 days after birth. We still have a 100th-day ceremony when a baby survives in 100 days. Nowadays our medical system develops very well, so the babies grow in good health, but we keep the 100th-day ceremony to wish for the baby’s life-long fortune.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin
In the past, we preferred boys to girls, so when boys were born, it was fortunate for the family.
>>In the past, we only acknowledged men. it was a happy day for the family if they were blessed with a baby boy.
That day, We hung a rope with red chilly pepper above the front gate of the house.
>>In celebration of that day, a chilly red pepper were tied on a thread and hung outside the door
The purpose is to boast of having a boy in their family and to wish for the boy’s long life without sickness and bad fortunes.
>>The purpose is to boast the coming of a baby boy in their family and to wish the boy with long life and good fortunes ahead of him.
In addition, When there was a rope hung above the front gate, people didn’t visit the house to protect the baby from viruses or germs out of the house.
>>In addition, if people saw the red pepper tied on a thread in front of the house people would not dare visit the house to protect the baby from viruses and germs.
That’s because babies died of sickness or contagion within 100 days after birth. We still have a 100th-day ceremony when a baby survives in 100 days.
>>That was because a lot of babies died of contagious diseases 100 days after their birth so we honor the first 100th day of a baby.
Nowadays our medical system develops very well, so the babies grow in good health, but we keep the 100th-day ceremony to wish for the baby’s life-long fortune.
>>Nowadays our medical system keeps on developing and evolving. the babies can already be protected by vaccine but we still honor the first 100 days of the baby.
Jasmin
In the past, we preferred boys to girls, so when boys were born, it was fortunate for the family.
>>In the past, we only acknowledged men. it was a happy day for the family if they were blessed with a baby boy.
That day, We hung a rope with red chilly pepper above the front gate of the house.
>>In celebration of that day, a chilly red pepper were tied on a thread and hung outside the door
The purpose is to boast of having a boy in their family and to wish for the boy’s long life without sickness and bad fortunes.
>>The purpose is to boast the coming of a baby boy in their family and to wish the boy with long life and good fortunes ahead of him.
In addition, When there was a rope hung above the front gate, people didn’t visit the house to protect the baby from viruses or germs out of the house.
>>In addition, if people saw the red pepper tied on a thread in front of the house people would not dare visit the house to protect the baby from viruses and germs.
That’s because babies died of sickness or contagion within 100 days after birth. We still have a 100th-day ceremony when a baby survives in 100 days.
>>That was because a lot of babies died of contagious diseases 100 days after their birth so we honor the first 100th day of a baby.
Nowadays our medical system develops very well, so the babies grow in good health, but we keep the 100th-day ceremony to wish for the baby’s life-long fortune.
>>Nowadays our medical system keeps on developing and evolving. the babies can already be protected by vaccine but we still honor the first 100 days of the baby.
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