How have cars improved our lives or have caused more problems than benefits?
학생이 쓴 원문
I definitely agree first one.
Developing of transportation technology improved our lives.
although, there are some problems like a air pollution however we earned more advantages than disadvantages.
강사 첨삭
Het [이름]! Cars have indeed improved our lives and made it easier especially for traveling.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I definitely agree first one.
>> I wholeheartedly agree with the first point.
Developing of transportation technology improved our lives.
>> The development of transportation technology has significantly improved our lives.
although, there are some problems like a air pollution however we earned more advantages than disadvantages.
>> However, there are some challenges such as air pollution; nevertheless, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
>> I wholeheartedly agree with the first point.
Developing of transportation technology improved our lives.
>> The development of transportation technology has significantly improved our lives.
although, there are some problems like a air pollution however we earned more advantages than disadvantages.
>> However, there are some challenges such as air pollution; nevertheless, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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