How have your faults hindered you?
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Wonderful Wednesday Sir [이름]!
When you make a mistake, there are only three things you should ever do about it: admit it, learn from it and don\'t repeat it. Sometimes we have to make a big mistake to figure out how to make things right, mistakes are painful but they are the only way to find out the reality. You were great in expressing your thoughts Sir [이름], keep it up!^^
~Teacher Eunice
Everybody makes faults and develop themselves after making a fault.
>> Everybody have faults in life and learned from their past mistakes.
>> OR: Everybody commits mistakes in life and eventually, learned from their past mistakes.
\"Failure is a stepping stone to success.\"
>> Correct!
I fully agree with this idiom.
>> Correct!
I am working at the hospital as a radiation therapist.
>> Correct!
I have made a lot of mistakes since I joined my hospital and I became a senior staff in our department with a better technique and knowledge.
>> I have made a lot of mistakes since I worked in the hospital and then I became a senior staff in our department with a better technique and knowledge.
I think faults is very important component to make people successful life.
>> I think committing a mistake is a very important component to make people have a successful life.
Faults was never hindered me during my life.
>> Faults never hindered me to become successful in life.
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