How have your interests changed as the eyars went by?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was interested in reading comic books. But as I grow up, I\'m not interested in comic books. Now I usually watch Netflix in my relax time. And, since a few years ago, I\'m trying to make hobby that is exercise. I do that to be healthier.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] U! Thank you so much for sharing with me how your interests have changed over time. Indeed, changes in our interests happen with age and shift in our priorities.
~T. Jenna
I was interested in reading comic books.
Correct, or
>> I was into reading comic books when I was a child.
But as I grow up, I\'m not interested in comic books.
>>But as I grow up, this has changed. I\'m no longer interested in comic books.
Now I usually watch Netflix in my relax time.
>>Now, I usually watch Netflix during ym free time to relax.
And, since a few years ago, I\'m trying to make hobby that is exercise.
>>And, since a few years ago, I\'ve been trying to make/develop a better hobby that/which is exercising.
I do that to be healthier.
Correct, or
>>I\'ve been doing this to keep fit (to remain strong, healthy, and physically sound).
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