How have your past molded you and what are you doing now for your future?
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I think because I was in the YMCA, I can be a little good like now in sports.
I learned how to jump high, run fast, and skip.
So now, I am a little good.
Also, I have a hobby of jump rope.
My highest score is doing 2000 in 30 minutes. But I will be more good at it if I practice a lot..:-)
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How have your past molded you and what are you doing now for your future?
I think because I was in the YMCA, I can be a little good like now in sports.
>>> I think because I studied in the YMCA, that is why I can be a little good in sports just like now.
I learned how to jump high, run fast, and skip.
>>> CORRECT
So now, I am a little good.
>>> CORRECT
OR: That is the reason why I\'m good in those skills.
Also, I have a hobby of jump rope.
>>> Also, I have a hobby of exercising using the jump rope.
My highest score is doing 2000 in 30 minutes.
>>> My highest score so far is 2000 in 30 minutes.
OR: I was able to do 2000 jumps in 30 minutes.
But I will be more good at it if I practice a lot.
>>> But I will be better at it if I practice a lot.
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