How have your strengths help you to succeed?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
Does your strength help you to become successful in life? That\'s the meaning of the question. I\'m certain that first impression doesn\'t last because you can only know the real person behind the mask after some time. There\'s nothing wrong being true to ourselves as long as we don\'t offend somebody. The right people will stay in our lives regardless of what kind of person we are. Great composition!
~Teacher Eunice
I am not sure if I understand about your question.
>> I am not sure if I understand your question.
I will answer as I understand.
>> I will answer according to what I understand
When somebody see me first time, He or she usually think I look like unkind or having complain to them.
>> When somebody sees me for the first time, he or she usually thinks that I look unkind or like I\'m having complain to them.
It make me difficult to make a friend, however If people keep the relationship with me continuously, they change their mind and think I am not a bad guy.
>> It\'s difficult for me to make friends. However, if people keep the relationship with me continuously, they change their mind on what they think about me.
OR
>> It\'s difficult for me to make friends with other people but if they will get to know me more, they\'ll find out that first impression doesn\'t last.
I think my strength is sociability.
>> I think my strength is being sociable.
I love to meet people, to talk with them and to drink some alcohol.
>> I love meeting other people and talk to them while drinking some alcohol.
It brings me to listen a various story from my friends and colleagues.
>> It makes me listen to various stories from my friends and colleagues.
I have not had a enemy during my life.
>> I haven\'t had an enemy in my entire life.
That is why I can have a stable job and I can keep a good relationship with most people.
>> That is why I can have a stable job and I can keep a good relationship with most of the people.
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