How homework affects the brain?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think to do homework, we make a study plan, and find something to need homework.
By preparing and doing homework, we think a lot.
Then our brain has a good influence such to be activated and stimulated.
강사 첨삭
Happy day to you, Jenna. It\'s good that you keep doing your homework. You may not know the benefits of doing you homework, but doing it makes a difference. Have a wonderful day ahead of you. Take care!~ T. Lyn
I think to do homework, we make a study plan, and find something to need homework.
>>I think about my doing my homework, I make a study plan, I look for things that I need homework for.
By preparing and doing homework, we think a lot.
By preparing and doing homework, we think a lot.
>>We think a lot while preparing homework.
Then our brain has a good influence such to be activated and stimulated.
Then our brain has a good influence such to be activated and stimulated.
>>Then our brain has a good effect of being activated and stimulated.
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