How i can forget bothering stuffs
학생이 쓴 원문
I try to forget what bothers me. For doing this, i usually sleep or listen to music. From time to time, it is too hard to do it. While I am closing my eyes, I am still reminding what happened. At the time, the ways I use for forgetting are useless. So I have to do something else : like Writing what I feel now or reading some books that I can be sympathy. Sometimes sad stuffs are really helpful to forget bothering things. Are use this weight to cry and crying a lot makes me feel better. I feel refresh, and I feel like all the blood in my body is changed. Sometimes It makes me feel that I have to live different from now on. Because most sad stories contain the miserable life or the bad situation. Has it is really helpful to forget the pattering stuff at the time, at the same time, it motivates my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this one. Bothering things are sometimes unavoidable. We always experience them every now and then, whether we like it or not. What matters is how we deal with it, not letting bothering things get into you or suck out all the goodness in you.
-T. Beth
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I try to forget what bothers me. >>> correct
For doing this, i usually sleep or listen to music.
>>> To do this, I usually sleep or listen to music.
From time to time, it is too hard to do it.
>>> correct
While I am closing my eyes, I am still reminding what happened.
>>> When I try to close my eyes, I am still reminded of what happened.
At the time, the ways I use for forgetting are useless.
>>> At that time, the ways I use to forget are useless.
So I have to do something else : like Writing what I feel now or reading some books that I can be sympathy.
>>> So I have to do something else like writing about how I feel now or reading some books which I can sympathize with.
Sometimes sad stuffs are really helpful to forget bothering things.
>>> Sometimes sad stuffs are really helpful in forgetting bothering things.
Are use this weight to cry and crying a lot makes me feel better.
>>> I do this to cry because crying a lot makes me feel better.
I feel refresh, and I feel like all the blood in my body is changed.
>>> I feel refreshed and it\'s like all the blood in my body has changed.
Sometimes It makes me feel that I have to live different from now on.
>>> Sometimes it makes me feel that I have to live differently from now on.
Because most sad stories contain the miserable life or the bad situation.
>>> correct
Has it is really helpful to forget the pattering stuff at the time, at the same time, it motivates my life.
>>> As it is really helpful to forget about the bothering stuff at that time, it also motivates me in life.
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