How I celebrate my birthday.

2022-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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First, my family light a candle and light a fire. Second, I put out all the lights on the candles. Third, My family eats cake. Forth, my parents have given parents me. Finally, I have my own free time.

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~ T. Camille

First, my family light a candle and light a fire.
>> First, my family lights a candle.
Second, I put out all the lights on the candles.
>> CORRECT!
Third, My family eats cake.
>> Third, my family and I eat the cake.
Forth, my parents have given parents me.
>> Fourth, my parents give presents to me.
Finally, I have my own free time.
>> CORRECT!

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