How I feel about meeting new people
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I do like meeting new people. Because I can socialize with them and I\'m able to make new connections. It also boosts my happiness as well.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Dave!
This is your revised composition from last week\'s homework. Thanks for uploading it. You can find the corrected version below.
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Jean~~
How can school encourage children to eat more vegetables?
Growing a patch may encourage children to eat more vegetables because after they plant the seeds, the children may have a chance to harvest crops.
>>> Growing a vegetable patch may encourage children to eat more vegetables because, after planting seeds, they will have the chance to harvest crops.
It Would make children proud and harvested crops will be used for school lunch. And they would eat vegetables frequently, growing them healthier.
>>> Planting seeds and harvesting crops makes them proud, and those veggies could even be used for school lunches. That way, they’ll eat veggies more often and stay healthier.
>>> OR: As a result, they would eat vegetables more frequently, making them healthier.
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