How I feel about using animals for medical purpose.

2018-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I\'m so sorry that using animals for human\'s medical purpose. Because they are also alive and people don\'t own animals. But there isn\'t alternative and if we don\'t use animals, lots of side effects would be caused to human. Thus I think it should continue until animals can substitute with another things.

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I\'m so sorry that using animals for human\'s medical purpose. Because they are also alive and people don\'t own animals.

>> I feel so sorry for animals that are used for human\'s medical purpose because they are also alive and people don\'t own animals.

But there isn\'t alternative and if we don\'t use animals, lots of side effects would be caused to human.

>> However, there isn\'t any alternatives and if we don\'t use animals, lots of side effects would be caused to humans.

Thus I think it should continue until animals can substitute with another things.

>> Thus, I think it should continue until they find a substitute.

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