How I keep clean my room
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I keep my room clean to turn on the vacuum cleaner.
Second, I keep my room clean to organize things.
Third, I keep my room clean to organize clothes.
Finally, I keep my room clean to fold the duvet.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s nice to know that you clean your room. I bet your mom is happy about that.
- Teacher Debbie
>> First, I vacuum my room to keep it clean.
Second, I keep my room clean to organize things. Third, I keep my room clean to organize clothes.
>> Second, I organize things like my clothes to keep my room clean.
Finally, I keep my room clean to fold the duvet.
>> Finally, I fold the duvet to keep my room clean.
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