How I make friends

2023-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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I make friends easily. I usually approach guys first and I get close with them. Then I give guys something to eat and play with them. And I go to my friend’s house and play games together so we get closer each other.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Awesome Thursday to you ^^ Thank you for doing your homework.

T. DON

I make friends easily. I usually approach guys first and I get close with them. Then I give guys something to eat and play with them. And I go to my friend’s house and play games together so we get closer each other.
>> I make friends easily. I usually approach them first and I get close with them. Then I give them something to eat and play with them. And we go to my friend’s house and play games together so we can get closer.

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