How I overcome fear.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I overcome the fear to read some books.
Second, I overcome the fear to play a fun video game.
Third, I can overcome the fear to communicate with my mom.
Lastly, I can overcome the fear to watch TV shows.
강사 첨삭
That\'s nice! Thank you for sharing how you can overcome your fear [이름]. Good job! Keep safe and see you soon!
~T. Annie
First, I overcome the fear to read some books.
>>First, I can overcome fear by reading some books.
OR>>First, I read some books to help me get over my fear.
Second, I overcome the fear to play a fun video game.
Second, I overcome the fear to play a fun video game.
>>Second, I can overcome fear by playing some fun video games.
Third, I can overcome the fear to communicate with my mom.
Third, I can overcome the fear to communicate with my mom.
>>Third, I can overcome fear by communicating with my mom.
Lastly, I can overcome the fear to watch TV shows.
Lastly, I can overcome the fear to watch TV shows.
>>Lastly, I can overcome fear to watch TV shows.
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