How I reduce stress of study
학생이 쓴 원문
I go out and play with my friends.
If I have time I go to theater to see movie or go to a bookstore.
I usally go out to reduce my stress.
If I'm tired of the study I go to bad early.
Sleeping is my favorite kind of reducing stress of study
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once. Sometimes the most important thing in a whole day is the rest we take between two deep breaths. Don't stress yourself too much. J
-Teacher May-
I go out and play with my friends.
>>CorrectIf I have time I go to theater to see movie or go to a bookstore.>> If I have time I go to a theater to see a movie or go to a bookstore.I usally go out to reduce my stress.>> I usually go out to reduce my stress.If I'm tired of the study I go to bad early.>> If I get tired while studying I go to bed early.Sleeping is my favorite kind of reducing stress of study
>> Sleeping is my favorite kind of activity to reduce stress that I get when studying.
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