How I spend the holidays
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This holidays I just stayed at home with my family. We just celebrated the christmas with a cake. I waited for music awards to watch bts stage. That’s all what I did on the holidays. It was kind of boring but I’m satisfied with what I did.
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This holidays I just stayed at home with my family.
Happy New Year!
>> During these holidays, I just stayed at home with my family.
We just celebrated the christmas with a cake.
>> We just celebrated the Christmas by eating cake.
I waited for music awards to watch bts stage.
>> I waited for music awards to watch BTS on stage.
That’s all what I did on the holidays.
>> That\'s all I did on the holidays.
It was kind of boring but I’m satisfied with what I did.
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