How I take my grandma
학생이 쓴 원문
I take my grandma to play with grandma.
That is because my grandma likes playing.
My second reason is my grandma always plays with me every day.
My third reason is playing with grandma is very fun.
Finally, grandma is always good for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! It\'s nice to know that you and your grandma spend time with each other and that you\'re close. Enjoy every minute with her.
- Teacher Debbie
I take my grandma to play with grandma.
>> I play with my grandma.
That is because my grandma likes playing.
>> This is a good sentence.
My second reason is my grandma always plays with me every day.
>> She plays with me every day.
My third reason is playing with grandma is very fun.
>> Playing with her is very fun.
Finally, grandma is always good for me.
>> She is always good to me.
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