How important are clocks for you?
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Hello Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
It\'s 4 out of 10 for me.
>> CORRECT!
Because at school, I always wait for the break. And I don\'t have my cell phone or watch, I have to see the clock.
>> Because at school, I always wait for the break and I don\'t have my cell phone or watch, so I have to look at the clock.
But except in that case, I don\'t need to see clock because we have more comfortable things like cell phone.
>> Except for that case, I don\'t need to look at the clock because we have more convenient things like the cellphone.
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