How important are first impressions to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s very important for me. Atmosphere is the first, and how he wears clothes is also important to first meeting.
Hair style is also important too. I really hate chinese boys\' common hair styles.... which is like a pineapple cut... sometimes all boys look same, so I cannot distinguish... I\'m sorry....
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] Su!
Thank you for doing your homework. Like what we\'ve discussed in class, attraction at first sight is very common so it pays to make a good impression.
-T. Caitlyn
It\'s very important for me.
>> CORRECT
Atmosphere is the first, and how he wears clothes is also important to first meeting.
>> The atmosphere of our first meeting and the way a person carries his clothes are important, too.
Hair style is also important too.
Hair style is also important too.
>> His hairstyle is also important.
I really hate chinese boys\' common hair styles.... which is like a pineapple cut... sometimes all boys look same, so I cannot distinguish... I\'m sorry....
> I really hate Chinese boys\' common hairstyle, which is like a pineapple cut, because it makes them look the same and difficult to distinguish.
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