How important are first impressions to you?

2023-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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It is very important to me. The first impressions are maintained for a long time. For example, when I met a boy after a few chatting, all of the decisions will be done at that time. If the first impressions are not good to me, I will not have a good time with him and I will never meet him again. I see all of the parts when I meet someone at the first time. I see a person\'s habbits like laughing habbits, talking habbits, eating habbits. I dont like a boy who hide his mouth when he laughs. If the boy I met laughs hiding his mouth, the attractions drops.... Like these situations, the first impression is important to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Gem!
I agree with you. First impressions especially on first dates is very important! thank you for your effort in writing today. See you in our next class! ~~
~~Teacher Kate 

It is very important to me.
>>CORRECT!
The first impressions are maintained for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
For example, when I met a boy after a few chatting, all of the decisions will be done at that time.
>>For example, when I met a boy after a short chat, all decisions will be made at that time.
If the first impressions are not good to me, I will not have a good time with him and I will never meet him again. 
>>If my first impressions of them are not good, I will not have a good time with him and I will never meet him again. 
I see all of the parts when I meet someone at the first time. I see a person\'s habbits like laughing habbits, talking habbits, eating habbits. 
>>I see all aspects when I meet someone the first time. I see a person\'s habits like their laughing habits, talking habits, eating habits. 
I dont like a boy who hide his mouth when he laughs. 
>>I don\'t like a boy who covers his mouth when he laughs. 
If the boy I met laughs hiding his mouth, the attractions drops....
>>If a boy covers his mouth when he laughs, the attraction drops (OR: It turns me off)
Like these situations, the first impression is important to me.
>>These are the situations where first impression is important to me.

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