How important are paid leave days to you when choosing a job?
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I don\'t care how much paid leave I receive.
Because, almost company give same amount paid leave.
There are few company give more paid leave, but it\'s very rare.
In Korea, a freshman could use fifteen days paid leave for a year.
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I don\'t care how much paid leave I receive. Because, almost company give same amount paid leave.
I don’t care how much paid leave I receive, because most companies give the same amount.
There are few company give more paid leave, but it\'s very rare.
There are a few companies that provide more paid leave, but they are very rare.
In Korea, a freshman could use fifteen days paid leave for a year.
In Korea, a new employee can use fifteen days of paid leave per year.
I don’t care how much paid leave I receive, because most companies give the same amount.
There are few company give more paid leave, but it\'s very rare.
There are a few companies that provide more paid leave, but they are very rare.
In Korea, a freshman could use fifteen days paid leave for a year.
In Korea, a new employee can use fifteen days of paid leave per year.
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