How important are qualifications compared to work experience when applying for a job?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion,both qualifications and
work experience are important when applying for a job.
Qualifications are an objective measure of professional skills.
Work experience is real practice in the special field.
Therefore, If you a qualification,You will have more opportunities for a job.
The influence of your work experience will increase depending on the special field application.
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In my opinion, both qualifications and work experience are important when applying for a job.
>> Correct
Qualifications are an objective measure of professional skills.
Qualifications are an objective measure of professional skills.
>> Correct
Work experience is real practice in the special field.
Work experience is real practice in the special field.
>> Work experience is real practice in a specific field.
Therefore, If you a qualification,You will have more opportunities for a job.
Therefore, If you a qualification,You will have more opportunities for a job.
>> Therefore, if you have the qualifications, you will have more opportunities for a job.
The influence of your work experience will increase depending on the special field application.
The influence of your work experience will increase depending on the special field application.
>> The influence of your work experience increases depending on the field you are applying to.
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