How important do you it is to use public transportation?

2018-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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These days people live so comportable life.Most people have a own car.everybody wants to convenient way. They don’t want to walking or taking public transportation. For example,every Sunday when they go to the church , everybody take a their car. That’s why parking place always so full.People have to think about our future. On the road if have a less car, pollutions are getting better. If take care by themselves, our environments get better.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]nah!

Here in the Philippines most people use public transportation. I think it is very important in our country.

I think it is more convenient to have your own vehicle if you have the money to buy one.

T[이름]k you for sharing your thoughts and opinion.

See you later!


-Teacher Shelly-



These days people live so comportable life.

>>> These days people are living a comfortable life.

Most people have a own car.

>>> Most people have their own cars.

everybody wants to convenient way.

>>> Everyone wants to live conveniently.

They don’t want to walking or taking public transportation.

>>> They don\'t like to walk or take the public transportation.
 For example,every Sunday when they go to the church , everybody take a their car.

>>> For example, every Sunday when they go to church, everybody have their own car.
 That’s why parking place always so full.

>>> That’s why parking places are always full.

People have to think about our future.

>>> People have to think about their future.
 On the road if have a less car, pollutions are getting better.

>>> On the road, if there are lesser cars , there will also be less pollution.
 If take care by themselves, our environments get better.

>>> If we take care of it, our environment gets better.


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