How important do you it is to use public transportation?
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Good morning, [이름]nah!
Here in the Philippines most people use public transportation. I think it is very important in our country.
I think it is more convenient to have your own vehicle if you have the money to buy one.
T[이름]k you for sharing your thoughts and opinion.
See you later!
-Teacher Shelly-
These days people live so comportable life.
>>> These days people are living a comfortable life.
Most people have a own car.
>>> Most people have their own cars.
everybody wants to convenient way.
>>> Everyone wants to live conveniently.
They don’t want to walking or taking public transportation.
>>> They don\'t like to walk or take the public transportation.
For example,every Sunday when they go to the church , everybody take a their car.
>>> For example, every Sunday when they go to church, everybody have their own car.
That’s why parking place always so full.
>>> That’s why parking places are always full.
People have to think about our future.
>>> People have to think about their future.
On the road if have a less car, pollutions are getting better.
>>> On the road, if there are lesser cars , there will also be less pollution.
If take care by themselves, our environments get better.
>>> If we take care of it, our environment gets better.
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