How important do you think education is?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]
I am very happy to talk with you today.
I think that education is important for himself and each country to improve their positive power.
To grow strong nation from the negative one, education is best way.
These day, because of Corona19 as you know, we are in difficulty. To treat this dad decrease, education is important.
Have good thanks giving day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about education.
I totally agree that it is very important not just for an individual but a nation as well.
You\'re right! Education is the key in finding ways on how we can solve this global pandemic.
I hope that it will be solved soon.
Anyway, I hope that you will have a good Thanksgiving day too with your family.
Take care! ^^
~Teacher Gina
I am very happy to talk with you today.
>> CORRECT.
I think that education is important for himself and each country to improve their positive power.
I think that education is important for himself and each country to improve their positive power.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think that education is important for himself and each country to improve their advantages.
To grow strong nation from the negative one, education is best way.
To grow strong nation from the negative one, education is best way.
>> To grow as a strong nation from a negative one, education is the best way.
These day, because of Corona19 as you know, we are in difficulty.
These day, because of Corona19 as you know, we are in difficulty.
>> These days, because of COVID-19 or corona virus as you know, we are in difficulty.
To treat this dad decrease, education is important.
To treat this dad decrease, education is important.
>> To treat this bad or severe disease, education is important.
Have good thanks giving day.
>> Have a good Thanksgiving day.
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