How important do you think it is to learn how to save money when you're young? why?
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How important do you think it is to learn how to save money when you\'re young? Why?
If you save money from a young age, you will have less trouble because you have enough money.
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OR>>If you save money from a young age, you will have less worries because you have saved enough.
However, if you spend a lot of money from a young age, it is hard to live because you don\'t have enough money and you can\'t make money as much as you are young.
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OR>>However, if you spend a lot of money from a young age, it is hard to live because you don\'t have enough money. Also, you can\'t make much money as you are young.
We need to prepare everything for an uncertain future.
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OR>>We need to prepare for any future uncertainties.
Otherwise, you will have a hard life because you don\'t know what will happen in the future.
>>Otherwise, you will have a hard life because you weren\'t prepared for such uncertainties.
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