How important do you think regular exercise is for maintaining both physical and mental health? Expl
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I think regular exercise is very important for both physical and mental health.
When people exercise regularly, their bodies become healthier and stronger.
Also exercise helps people try to keep mind health and positive.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
You are right! Exercise is really important not just for physical health, but for mental health too. Also, consistency is key to maintaining overall health.
- T. Caitlyn
I think regular exercise is very important for both physical and mental health.
>> CORRECT
When people exercise regularly, their bodies become healthier and stronger.
When people exercise regularly, their bodies become healthier and stronger.
>> CORRECT
Also exercise helps people try to keep mind health and positive.
Also exercise helps people try to keep mind health and positive.
>> Also, exercise helps people maintain mental health and stay positive.
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