How important is a college degree in Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
College degree can give a chance to choose a good job and it is basic qualification. Most Korean has well-educated, it is essential.
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1. College degree can give a chance to choose a good job and it is basic qualification.
>>Earning a college degree can give you a chance to choose a good job as it is a basic qualification.
2. Most Korean has well-educated, it is essential.
>>Most Koreans are well-educated because it is essential.
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