How important is a person\'s appearance?
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Appearance affects to the judgment about someone and behavior toward that person often changes according to it. Actually appearance is just a part of someone\'s various features but we tend to matter appearance too much and I think that\'s because appearance is the easiest thing that we can know about others. Appearance matters in many areas. When meeting new people and making new relationships appearance often plays a role. When getting a part-time job or even a real job appearance is sometimes important.
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Hello, [이름] [이름]~
Our outward appearance is a big factor as this is what other people see first~ I, therefore, agree with your given answer, people judge you first based on what they see...
Chammy
Appearance affects to the judgment about someone and behavior toward that person often changes according to it.
>> Appearance affects the judgment about someone and behavior toward that person often changes according to it.
OR
>>Appearance influences judgment and behavior towards a person.
Actually appearance is just a part of someone\'s various features but we tend to matter appearance too much and I think that\'s because appearance is the easiest thing that we can know about others.
>>Actually, appearance is just a part of someone\'s various features but we tend to matter about appearance too much, and I think that\'s because appearance is the easiest thing that we can learn about others.
Appearance matters in many areas. When meeting new people and making new relationships appearance often plays a role.
When getting a part-time job or even a real job appearance is sometimes important.
>>Correct
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