How important is a person\'s appearance?

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I don\'t want to admit that person\'s appearance is important.

>> CORRECT

However, when people meet a somebody at first sight, the first thing we see is appearance and if one looks good, we have a good feeling to him/her.

>> However, when people meet somebody for the first time, the first thing they see is the physical appearance and if one looks good, we have a good feeling for him/her.

So, we believe that people have a nice appearance would have a good personality.

>> So, we believe that if a person has a nice appearance, he/she has a good personality.

But it is not always right.

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In case of interview for a job, interviewer have a good feeling to beautiful women or gentle men, if everybody has a same ability and qualification.

>> In a job interview, interviewers have a good feeling with beautiful women or gentlemen, even if everyone has the same abilities and qualifications.

When people have a blinding date, man and woman express their mind and ask to partner having a next date if she or he looks good.

>> When people go on blind date, men and women express their mind and ask their partners to meet each other again if she or he looks good.

The beauty varies in each country. Beauty is important things but I want people to see mind and personality first.

>> Beauty varies in each country. Beauty is an important thing but I want people to consider the mind and personality first.