How important is a person's appearnce?
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In my opinion, a person\'s appearance is important.
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It is because a good image will be a strong advantage to live.
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It doesn\'t mean beautiful and attractive face is important.
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It means that a proper attitude is important.
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If people go to work, they need to wear suitable clothes like a business suit and they have to keep a decent appearance.
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If people join a party, they need a cheerful smile.
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In addition, people can be evaluated by their first impression.
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So, if people give a good first impression, they can get additional benefits.
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I think that the most important thing is not beautiful face but a proper attitude in every situation.
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All thease reasons, I agree with the statement that a person\'s appearnace is important to have a good relationship with others.
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