How important is a person's appearnce?

2018-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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In my opinion, a person's appearance is important. It is because a good image will be a strong advantage to live. It doesn't mean beautiful and attractive face is important. It means that a proper attitude is important. If people go to work, they need to wear suitable clothes like a business suit and they have to keep a decent appearance. If people join a party, they need a cheerful smile. In addition, People can be evaluated by their first impression. So, if people give a good first impression, they can get additional benefits. I think that the most important thing is not beautiful face but a proper attitude in every situation. All thease reasons, I agree with the statement that a person's appearnace is important to have a good relationship with others.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!(\",)

Well said, [이름]. You made your point very well. The organization of your ideas are also great. Keep it up!(\",)

~T. Lynn

In my opinion, a person\'s appearance is important.

>> correct!

It is because a good image will be a strong advantage to live.
>> correct!
It doesn\'t mean beautiful and attractive face is important.

>> correct!

It means that a proper attitude is important.

>> correct!
 If people go to work, they need to wear suitable clothes like a business suit and they have to keep a decent appearance. 

>> correct!
 If people join a party, they need a cheerful smile.
>> correct!
In addition, people can be evaluated by their first impression.

>> correct!

So, if people give a good first impression, they can get additional benefits. 

>> correct!
I think that the most important thing is not beautiful face but a proper attitude in every situation.
>> correct!
All thease reasons, I agree with the statement that a person\'s appearnace is important to have a good relationship with others.

>> correct!

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