How important is beauty in your daily life?

Hi [이름]!

I\'m really amazed by your thoughts.

I think you can really write well.

You study hard and you also work hard.

I hope you keep writing because I enjoy reading your compositions.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I guess I just lived my daily life with no goal.

>> I guess I just lived my daily life with no goals.
 I thought a lot about the topic of today\'s essay and looked back at me.

>>  I thought a lot about the topic of today\'s essay and really looked at myself. 

I think that everyday life is an opportunity to set goals and achieve them.

>> Correct

I think I don\'t do it by acting

>> I think I lack action on this part.
So I feel ashamed to say this, but I must practice a lot and perfect what I can\'t do well.

>> So I feel ashamed to say this, but I must practice a lot and try to master what I can\'t do well.
I will plan my self, and do that things.

>> I will plan my life and do those things.