How important is English for you in your job or future?

2025-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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In korea, Speaking English is very important. In my childhood, Study English was essential for Enter a high level univercity. And now, In my company always press me to get a high grade of opic exam. If i get a low level grade, Promotion will be skiped. So, all of the worker have to study English and they are try to hard. But actually, we doesn\'t use a English in company and foreigner workers are so few. And they are good at korean. If we need a conversation, Using korean is basic. Thesedays, our company encourage to studying a chinese. It\'s very stress to me. First of all, I need to get a high level grade and ability that talk with foreiner freely.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

In korea, Speaking English is very important.
>> In Korea, Speaking English is very important.
In my childhood, Study English was essential for Enter a high level univercity.
>> Back in my childhood, studying English was essential for entering a high-level university.
And now, In my company always press me to get a high grade of opic exam.
>> And now, the company always presses me to get a high grade in the OPIC exam.
If i get a low level grade, Promotion will be skiped.
>>  If I get a low level or grade, my promotion will be skipped
OR >>  If I get a low level or grade, my promotion will be denied
So, all of the worker have to study English and they are try to hard.
>> So, all of the workers in our company have to study English and they need to try hard.
But actually, we doesn\'t use a English in company and foreigner workers are so few.
>> But actually, we don\'t use English in the company, and foreign workers are so few.
And they are good at korean. 
>> And, they are good at Korean
OR >> And they are good at speaking Korean
If we need a conversation, Using korean is basic.
>> If we need to make a conversation, using Korean is a basic thing.
OR >> If we need to talk to each other, using Korean a basic thing.
These days, our company encourage to studying a chinese. 
>> These days, our company encourages everyone to study Chinese. 
It\'s very stress to me.
>> It\'s very stressful for me.
First of all, I need to get a high-level grade and ability that talk with foreiner freely.
>> First of all, I need to get a high-level grade and ability to talk to foreigners freely.

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