How important is family connection and relations in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s different family to family, Our family think important connection.
Actually, always contact with friends and family is not my cup of tea,
I only usually contact simple or important, So I don\'t do contact.
Because of this My mom nag me about it all the time.
I\'m not hate connect with friends and family,
I like talking face to face more than SNS or call about daily life.
Because I think connection with SNS or call is very difficult to read about other\'s emotion.
But I always contact with my mom.
for example, She ask about my daily and I answer it.
I even get a connect from my mom about my brother\'s and dad\'s daily life.
In Korea, siblings never contact and There are even many siblings who don\'t have telephone number.
Even if they\'re in the telephone number, they didn\'t save \"sister\" or \"brother\", they save \"HoJeok mate\"
It\'s mean \"family register mate\".
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It\'s different family to family, Our family think important connection.
>>> It\'s different from family to family. Our family thinks the connection is important.
Actually, always contact with friends and family is not my cup of tea,
>>> Actually, always contacting with family and friends is not my cup of tea.
I only usually contact simple or important, So I don\'t do contact.
>>> I only usually contact them for simple or important matters, so I don\'t contact them often.
I only usually contact simple or important, So I don\'t do contact.
>>> I only usually contact them for simple or important matters, so I don\'t contact them often.
Because of this My mom nag me about it all the time.
>>> Because of this, my mom nags at me about it all the time.
I\'m not hate connect with friends and family,
>>> Because of this, my mom nags at me about it all the time.
I\'m not hate connect with friends and family,
>>> I do not hate connecting with friends and family,
I like talking face to face more than SNS or call about daily life.
>>> correct
Because I think connection with SNS or call is very difficult to read about other\'s emotion.
>>> Because I think connection through SNS or call is very difficult to read other\'s emotion.
Because I think connection with SNS or call is very difficult to read about other\'s emotion.
>>> Because I think connection through SNS or call is very difficult to read other\'s emotion.
But I always contact with my mom.
>>> correct
for example, She ask about my daily and I answer it.
>>> For example, she asks about my day and I answer it.
I even get a connect from my mom about my brother\'s and dad\'s daily life.
>>> I even connect with my mom about my brother\'s and dad\'s daily life.
>>> I even connect with my mom about my brother\'s and dad\'s daily life.
In Korea, siblings never contact and There are even many siblings who don\'t have telephone number.
>>> In Korea, siblings never contact each other and there are even many siblings who don\'t have each other\'s telephone number.
Even if they\'re in the telephone number, they didn\'t save \"sister\" or \"brother\", they save \"HoJeok mate\"
Even if they\'re in the telephone number, they didn\'t save \"sister\" or \"brother\", they save \"HoJeok mate\"
>>> Even if they do have the telephone number, they didn\'t save it as \"sister\" or \"brother\", they save it as \"HoJeok mate\"
It\'s mean \"family register mate\".
>>> It means \"family register mate\".
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