How important is fashion today compared with in the past?
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Today\'s fashion is more important than past. We express our individuality through clothes nowadays. Also, Today\'s fashion is pursue to have many functions which is light, strong, cleanliness and even beauty. In the past, I think that the fashion is just to show others. So only people in the past used to prefer pretty clothes and formal suites.
As a result, fashion is still being evolved to be functionable and eco- friendly
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>>>Today\'s fashion is more important than in the past.
We express our individuality through clothes nowadays.
>>> CORRECT
Also, Today\'s fashion is pursue to have many functions which is light, strong, cleanliness and even beauty.
>>> Also, Today\'s fashion is pursued to have many functions which are light, strong, cleanliness, and even beauty.
In the past, I think that the fashion is just to show others.
>>>In the past, I thought that fashion is just to show others.
So only people in the past used to prefer pretty clothes and formal suites.
>>>So only people in the past used to prefer pretty clothes and formal suits.
As a result, fashion is still being evolved to be functionable and eco- friendly
As a result, fashion is still being evolved to be functionable and eco- friendly
>>>As a result, fashion is still being evolved to be functional and eco- friendly.
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