How important is it that elderly relatives have a part in family life?
학생이 쓴 원문
This is a very difficult question to answer for me, I have never thought about living with elderly relatives, even grand parents.
Actually, I have been suffering from the conflicts between my wife and mother in law about bringing up my children. My wife and I are working together, so mother in law has been taking care of our children.
There are a lot of different opinions how to deal with children.
My mother's generation people think that they are right everything they did about the way of bring up children, but people in this century don't agree with their parents opinions. I think that there are many things we can learn from our parents but we must try to understand what our parent think.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about this topic. I agree with what you said, our parents are growing older so we should try to understand their beliefs and opinions. Anyway, you expressed yourself really good today! Great job! ^^
This is a very difficult question to answer for me, I have never thought about living with elderly relatives, even grand parents.
>>This is a very difficult question for me to answer, I have never thought about living with my elderly relatives, not even with my grandparents.
Actually, I have been suffering from the conflicts between my wife and mother in law about bringing up my children.
>> Actually, I have been suffering from conflicts between my wife and my mother in law about bringing up our children.
My wife and I are working together, so mother in law has been taking care of our children.
>> My wife and I are both working so my mother in law has been taking care of our children.
There are a lot of different opinions how to deal with children.
There are a lot of different opinions how to deal with children.
>> There are a lot of different opinions on how to deal with children.
My mother\'s generation people think that they are right everything they did about the way of bring up children, but people in this century don\'t agree with their parents opinions.
>> My mother\'s generation thinks that they are right about everything on how to bring up children but people in this century don\'t agree with their parents\' opinion.
I think that there are many things we can learn from our parents but we must try to understand what our parent think.
>> I think there are many things we can learn from our parents that is why we must try to understand what they think.
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