How important is it to be poilte to old people even though they are often rude?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think, a polite manner for old people is a traditional habitual. We must respect old people in tradtional aspect. But now a days, it seem to be changed a lots than I thought. As you know, all of people are getting old, sometimes we will die. I know, you know, everybody know. But young person have no think about it. They don\'t think about the future. It is a fact to be a old person in the future. I respect my father and my mother. They have no even education time of elimentry school. But they gave a lot of love to me than I gave my son. All of them was much better than I did. My mother took care of grand parents and my brothers and sister, my cousin... but my parent did\'t said complain about that. They thought it was a duty.
What do you think about it?
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Hello [이름]! :)
What do you think about it?
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I think, a polite manner for old people is a traditional habitual.
>> I think a polite manner for old people is a traditional habitual.
We must respect old people in tradtional aspect.
>> We must respect old people in the traditional aspects.
But now a days, it seem to be changed a lots than I thought.
>> But nowadays, it seems to be a lot has changed than I thought.
As you know, all of people are getting old, sometimes we will die.
>> As you know, all people are will get old, eventually, we all die.
I know, you know, everybody know. But young person have no think about it.
>> We all know about that, but young people have no idea about it.
They don\'t think about the future. It is a fact to be a old person in the future.
>> They don\'t think about the future. It is a fact that people get old.
I respect my father and my mother.
>> CORRECT!
They have no even education time of elimentry school.
>> They didn\'t even finish elementary school.
But they gave a lot of love to me than I gave my son.
>> But they gave a lot of love to me than I give my son.
All of them was much better than I did.
>> All of them were much better than I did.
My mother took care of grand parents and my brothers and sister, my cousin...
>> My mother took care of my grandparents, my brothers, my sister, and my cousin.
but my parent did\'t said complain about that.
>> But my parents didn\'t complain about that.
They thought it was a duty.
>> CORRECT!
What do you think about it?
>> I think it\'s important to still be polite to old people even though they are often rude. Being kind and polite to someone who is being rude to you says a lot about your personality. Regardless of the age. But also, I believe respect is not being asked for, it\'s being gained for. Respect knows no age, young or old should have the same level of respect for each other.
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